Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, July 2, 2021
Spectacular Story
Kia ora and welcome or welcome back to my blog. On Wednesday I wrote a story in literacy about four kids going to school. Have you ever done a story about Marshland School?
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Hi Sylvie! I really enjoyed your story! Yes I have written about Marshland School before. Maybe next time you could check where you place your commas. Other than that this was amazing! Have a great day.
ReplyDelete-Zoe
Hi Sylvie, I know I don't go to your school but I wanted to comment on your wonderful blog! I really like your story and about how it is related to you and about your school some way. To answer your question I have never made a story about Marshland school. Great job Sylvie I really like it! Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteBy the girl that is your friend that doesn't go to your school, Pippa